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Friday, June 24, 2016

Reviews on "Song of a Flying Sparrow"



Review Point: 3 out of 5
Author: Rajeev Pundir
Genre: Fiction/Humour
Publisher: Author’s Ink
ISBN: 978-9385137440
Page Count: 135
Edition: First

Platform
Story is about two friends Chiya and Chanda. While Chanda is from a poor family, Chiya is the only daughter of billionaire Mr Ruhela. Chanda has to support her family to have survival out of the toughest period, on the other hand, Chiya who has everything a wants to have lacks love from her parents, the only desire. Story takes a turn when Chiya comes to know that Mr Ruhela is not her father and both of her parents were divorcee ante their marriage. Chiya leaves her home sickness and comes out to find her actual father. How tougher her journey is? Who is Mr. Tyagi and why Chiya’s mother wants her to marry him even knowing he is a divorcee. What the story actually goes around? Will Chiya find her real parents? Will they accept her? Will Chiya get love from her parents? To know all these things, go through the book Song of a Flying Sparrow.

Strength of the Book
Writer has put his best efforts to make characters and incidences alive. Chiya character in itself is a deep research for the novel. Set in the current trend of society this novel fulfils the criteria of bringing all these things together and throughout the narration. Proper literature is used to print the story in the mind of readers with complete entertainment. Story has several emotional points which make readers to shed tears for the sake of live of characters. Proper starting is given to this and moreover, the book does not take end at end, narrating unexpected change in Chanda’ life, it takes a new beginning which is really an impressive step to keep readers entertained. The very first meet of Chiya with that DU professor is incredibly amazing and layered in tryst of emotions.

Weakness
The very first thing which brings book down is character justification. Chanda character disappears as story covers pages. Nothing more described about Chanda’s family, it could be better if had, as introduced Chanda among central characters in the beginning. At few points, writer has introduced unnecessary length of narration i.e. communication between pleader and inspector in police station. Chiya’s only male friend is not described separately and hence it is not able to keep readers with him. Theme is nice but platform is weak.

Conclusion
Author Rajeev has done justice with the book. As name suggest, story goes along with. Cover page is also awesome. Blurb could be more impressive. Chiya is introduced as gnawing character for readers which keeps readers tied until the end page. Ending of the novel is really shocking, it is like to make readers out of dreams. At few points, writer has exaggerated the sections which can be skipped as put no effect on the flow. A very common beginning is used but very unique platform is given as story matures after couple of pages. Touching the deep of emotions and someway reality of high-profile people, this novel is a good effort to give light on one of such lives. At last, novel is a good read and makes readers to appreciate author for such book. 

Reviewing Point:
3 out of 5

Review By:
- Kamal Paneru

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Tuesday, June 14, 2016

Reviews on "Chasing Illusions"



Review Point: 3 out of 5
Author: Utakarsh Jayant
Publisher: Frog Books, Imprint of leadstart publishing
Genre: Fiction
ISBN: 978-93-52013-55-5
Edition: First
Page Count: 239

About the Book
With his small family, Ajay lives in a small village Bagbola near Delhi area. He is much confuse about his doing and not sure what to do to have better future. He loves Vidhi since childhood, she lives next to him. Then in the race of being ahead, Ajay with his friend Chhotu comes out to earn money. He tries all good and bad ways to follow his dream. Soon in the company of politicians, he enters in the business of real-estate. Here following adversities, he becomes culprit by collapsing lands of farmers. With his unending desires and hunger of money, he keeps going ahead with the layer of corruption and power. What is his actual dream? Will he come back from that world of sin? Will Vidhi be with him? Will politicians ditch him? How will he face farmers further? To know more, go through the Chasing Illusion.

Strength of the Book
Book is narrated in such a beautiful manner that each and every bite of the scenario is described properly. Nothing seems imaginary there. Writer has maintained a flow of the book throughout the narration. Proper separation is done to distinguish stories running together with the major one. Centralised character is perfectly depicted with action, emotions and behaviours. Very simple language is used which makes readers go through in flow. Place and incidences description is done very well. Besides, dialogs are also written properly to maintain the consistency of entertainment. Digging real facts of real-estate world, this book gives light on the conditions of poor and farmers who are being looted by powerful persons. Ending given to the book is impressive and leaves happiness over readers' face.

Weakness of the Book
Book lacks interest. Theme chosen is perfect but plot doesnt do justification with it. Dialog writing is not that much impressive. Very pity thing for a reader is when the very first page of book contains grammatical error and it is one of them, errors continue in much of pages. Blurb is not impressive. Cover page also leaves a negative impact. Character justification is not done properly. Also, chemistry between Vidhi and Ajay lacks attention of readers.

Conclusion
Author Utakarsh Jayant has put his best efforts to make this book impressive and somehow he has been successful in it. At present, Indian farmers are really facing bad days and losing their lands, this fact is well clicked in this book. Author has done great job and studied well. Blurb is the naive form of any book, if it is not well, it will not grow. Blurb is not grasping. The way author has made fiction seeming real is amazing. Well-set platform and proper dialog writing give it strength. As a debut work, Utakarsh has proved his capability to stand alone uniquely with claps of admiration.


Reviewing Point:
3 out of 5

Review By:
- Kamal Paneru

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